Graham, I haven't been following this too closely but I am finding it very interesting. Here is one thing that will likely find its way into something I am working on:

at verse 21, “and IHOAH made for Adam and his intellectual companion, sheltering bodies of increasing density, and enveloped them with care”

at verse 23, “IHOAH therefore separated Adam from the ethereal sphere of existence, to elaborate the adamic element from which he had been extracted”

at verse 24 “And IHOAH cast forth Adam from the realm of primeval consciousness…”